yesterday we learnt about flamingo the best part of it was learning new stuff about them. I will tell you one of the fact the pink color of their feather come from the food. here is my DLO
I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McClelland. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, November 19, 2021
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hi Ashavi Bella her something i like about your work is that you put a lot of effort into it so ya that was really good um something you need to work on is put a pit more pictures in your work so people can see them a bit more and it reminds me of all of the flamingos in other places but a question i need to ask is how? did you come up with the eider of this writing but it is a great writing
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